I love to play hockey for many reasons but I will share 2 of those with you. First of all, I love hockey because is a great sport to practice whit friends on a lack, on an ice or just in the street. In addition is a good occasion for do exercise, breath a new air, also make fun and sometimes just for socialize. My second reason is because when I play hockey is like if I forget my problems and I feel better after a game. In addition I put away my shyness. Finally, when I play it, I make the emptiness of my bad emotions and full of joy.
Emilie, I love the way that you describe your feelings when you play hockey! You have expressed your emotions very well in English!
ReplyDeleteCheck your last sentence. Check the verb "made" Do you need the past tense here, or should you use the simple present tense since you are talking about your feelings everytime you play hockey?
Did you know that you can play hockey on a coed ( men and women) team at Canadore? There is a league for students.
This is a well organized paragraph. Check the number 2. When we write you should always write the word for numbers from one to ten.
Hi, Emilie!
ReplyDeleteI don't really know a lots of things about hockey but I know when I play sport it's a very good way for forget problem.
I love your paragraph it's show that hockey is not just a "war" game. If I can said this like that. loll